Eyes open: low-key Gaussian blur, sepia filter, facial detection with expression-exaggeration for simplified comprehension. Reality softened and made legible.
Detailed visual imagery comes to mind from reading these vague descriptions; reading this must be the opposite of what the main character experiences. And yet the words feel rushed and have that “pull-to-refresh” feeling, which helps me imagine having a direct-to-cornea feed.
wonderfully put together; think I opened a good view rabbit holes - definitions / concepts to be used in verse-making | like the use of a few select terms / pieces of language
Quite incoherent to me but also a pleasant read. A mesh of subtle details and plot interwoven with obvious themes...or I, at least, think the themes are clear.
Detailed visual imagery comes to mind from reading these vague descriptions; reading this must be the opposite of what the main character experiences. And yet the words feel rushed and have that “pull-to-refresh” feeling, which helps me imagine having a direct-to-cornea feed.
Beautiful
wonderfully put together; think I opened a good view rabbit holes - definitions / concepts to be used in verse-making | like the use of a few select terms / pieces of language
Quite incoherent to me but also a pleasant read. A mesh of subtle details and plot interwoven with obvious themes...or I, at least, think the themes are clear.
Not sure what I just read. It's full of striking images, but vaguely unsettling.