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Asdf's avatar

Detailed visual imagery comes to mind from reading these vague descriptions; reading this must be the opposite of what the main character experiences. And yet the words feel rushed and have that “pull-to-refresh” feeling, which helps me imagine having a direct-to-cornea feed.

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Always Never Sewer Sliver's avatar

Beautiful

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The Many Man's avatar

wonderfully put together; think I opened a good view rabbit holes - definitions / concepts to be used in verse-making | like the use of a few select terms / pieces of language

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Alan Van Cullen's avatar

Quite incoherent to me but also a pleasant read. A mesh of subtle details and plot interwoven with obvious themes...or I, at least, think the themes are clear.

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Fr. Wah's avatar

Not sure what I just read. It's full of striking images, but vaguely unsettling.

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